Rough Cut!!

This is the rough cut of my video, i put the shots together and slowed down some parts for example, from 100% to 60%. I need to get some feedback on it so far, I'm thinking of putting the children parts in either black and white or decrease the saturation so you can tell its supposed to be set earlier on in the mans life. Also you can't really tell he is remembering parts of his childhood so i had the idea, of having a photo them editing it to black and white, then i will re-film a small part of it, at the start where he is sitting on the bench, and then gets the photo out, this will stimulate his memory, it will then switch to the 2 children playing. Im really pleased with the editing and filming so far, but it still had some tweaking to be made.
Here are some photos for shooting yesterday!